Grammar Tip – Who versus That
Who Versus That
I have noticed lately that there seems to be an increasing use of the word that in news reporting rather than the word who.
Example
The soldiers that fought in the battle.
It is not incorrect. You can use that for both objects and people, but it is not frequently used for people. I would have said “the soldiers who.” Apparently, using that is supposed to give a reporter some emotional distance.
Be that as it may, for business writing let’s stick to the basics: ?use who when referring to people and that for non-human things.
Examples
Incorrect
The organization who hired 100 new employees.
Correct
The organization that hired 100 new employees.
Incorrect
The woman that will speak tonight is an expert in her field.
Correct
The woman who will speak tonight is an expert in her field.
Remember, that starts a restrictive clause (a clause essential to the meaning of the sentence). You do not place commas around it.